“This was on the outside of the windshield, under the wipers,” he said. “I folded it up to keep the kid from seeing it but I guess I should give it to the police, what do you think?"
I looked and did a double take, staring at the spray-painted, stenciled letters on the accordion-folded cardboard over the printed cartoon sun:
$1 MILL FOR ADMIRAL 7 FILES & TAPE / DO NOT CALL POLICE / RAISE $ WAIT
A policeman reading over my shoulder whistled in amazement, "Hey, Gordy, lookit this." Too late not to tell the police.
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Yes, too late on both accounts. Great six! :)
ReplyDeletegreat six. makes me want more!
ReplyDeleteGreat idea to use the windshield shade for the hostage demands! Loved the understated humor in this too...
ReplyDeleteIntriguing curioius to see where it goes
ReplyDeleteGreat six, Lynne. Oops about the cops. :)
ReplyDeleteThe plot thickens (so to speak!). Fab snippet!
ReplyDeletethanks for stopping by and commenting, I've been working all day but now I'm going to go and treat myself to reading your snippets!
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