It wouldn't do to plow into a telephone pole and conveniently kill myself and save everyone else the trouble.
Half a mile away I was amazed to find that no one followed me and there was no other traffic on that deserted road that had once been Route 66. I drove into the small parking lot of a long defunct grocery store, slid the car out of view of the highway, and waited a few minutes until the van I recognized drove past. I wanted to follow it, but instead I turned back to where I had left Zane. I didn't want to do it but I couldn't help it, until I saw the car up ahead and it disappeared in a flash of light followed by the boom of an explosion and flames. That guy sure did like to blow up cars.
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OMG! Such an intense six! :)
ReplyDeleteThanks Jessica, believe it or not the action is just starting to build!
DeleteThis has some nice world building in it. Great six.
ReplyDeleteThanks Wendy, I love the small shabby corners of southern California-- particularly at night.
DeleteGood thing she did not follow
ReplyDeleteTrue, Sassy, it's getting dangerous.
DeleteDescriptive and tense six!
ReplyDeleteFelt like I was right there...intense six!
ReplyDeleteIntense!
ReplyDeleteThanks Pat, Christine and Angela, I was definitely going for intense.
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