Sunday, April 3, 2011

He confesses, she reacts, 7th Sunday six sentences

Here's my seventh Sunday six from Bride of the Living Dead, a romantic comedy about a woman who loves horror movies too much: Oscar and Daria, in a fever of foreplay at his house, stop when he announces the need to confess:
     He chuckled at my alarm and ran his hands along my back as if he couldn’t help himself. "I saw you walk into the screening decided to buy a ticket, follow you in and sit behind you. When we kept laughing at the same awful parts in the movie, I had to talk to you."
     "Very nice, I approve," I said, almost beyond words." I slipped my hand under his shirt and was lost to coherent thought.
     The rest of our conversation was in eloquent body language and we understood each other totally.

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9 comments:

  1. Sounds like these 2 defintely have a lot in common! Well done!

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  2. They are a perfect match. Nice six!

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  3. Not the confession I thought he would make. Nicely done!

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  4. Kathleen, Jessica, Sarah, Sassyspeaks & Lauri,
    Thanks! Our characters deserve some happiness in there between the conflict and tension!

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  5. Sounds like a great pair to me--fun six!

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  6. Sounds like a fun read. Loved the last sentence. :)

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  7. Thanks Susanna and Cate, your encouragement is much appreciated!

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