Sunday, September 4, 2011

28th Six Sentence Sunday, a dangerous seach

Further into forbidden territory in The Falstaff Vampire Files

I knew I could be arrested and lose my license if the old lady called Hal or the cops. But I needed to get my property back and I was still enraged that Hal had taken it. I walked into the darkened foyer. It was paved in dark red stone. It was late afternoon but very little daylight filtered in and the lights mounted on the wall glowed already in their twisted copper fittings. The veins in the alabaster seemed to pulse like reptilian eggs.

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12 comments:

  1. Fantastic scene you painted, wonderful six.

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  2. Wow, fantastic description. Loved it.

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  3. Kinda creepy and ominous description--great!

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  4. Alix, Jessica, Sassy, Cate and Laura,
    Thanks, that was my goal! Write on!

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  5. Creep descriptions, but vivid! Nice six.

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  6. Pulse like reptilian eggs. Ooooooh. Creepy!

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  7. Your descriptions leap off the page. Terrific six!

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  8. Wonderful detail. Way to paint a scene : )

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  9. Cara, Carrie, Taryn, Vivien and Eleri, thanks, odd as it may sound, for being appropriately creeped out!

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